Hi Mackenzie, Your work is good, it's got good punctuation and makes sense. My favourite subject is writing as well. Maybe next time make it a bit longer by adding more info.
Kia ora Mackenzie, I really like your work & your teacher's name Because Im half Irish. anyway I also play netball like you what team do you play for? Also great work your a star. feel free to comment on my blog just click my name addio (bye)
Hi Mackenzie,
ReplyDeleteYour work is good, it's got good punctuation and makes sense.
My favourite subject is writing as well. Maybe next time make it a bit longer by adding more info.
Kia ora Mackenzie,
ReplyDeleteI really like your work & your teacher's name Because Im half Irish. anyway I also play netball like you what team do you play for? Also great work your a star. feel free to comment on my blog just click my name addio (bye)